Hey Carlos, it's Dion from Yaldhurst Model School. Great job. I would suggest you try new words that aren't too long but not too hard. You need to have capitals for the "I" in each sentence. What one in the photo is you? Anyway, your blog post is pretty good. Bye!
Kia ora Carlos, I'm a year 7 student at Yaldhurst Model school, Today I wanted to have a look at your blog, next time can you go back and fix some spelling? Apart from that it's really good.Do you like speaking in english? Anyways Kind Regards Grace,
I liked the way you explained what you were doing and added a photo of you and what looks like a friend.
When I read your post I learnt about what you are confident about speaking languages, like how you said you were confident about speaking English in Australia. Actually, in April I'm going to Australia for around 15 nights so, cool!
Next time, you could maybe fix some of your spelling and punctuation because it seems you don't have much punctuation in your writing.
I'm glad your learning to speak english, it's really good to learn how to speak new languages, I hope you learn fast, anyways, would you mind if I ask a question. Ok, be ready for this: how fast are you learning, and is it a good thing, or a bad thing that you are, or aren't? Alright, that's all for today, goodbye Carlos!
Hi, I'm Rhys from Yaldhurst Model School. I loved the way you explained what you were doing and put in a photo of you and what looks like a friend.
When I read your post I learnt about what you are confident about speaking languages, like how you said you were confident about speaking English in Australia.
Next time I think, you could maybe fix some of your spelling and punctuation because it seems you don't have much punctuation in your writing.
I'm glad your learning to speak english, it's really good to learn how to speak new languages, I hope you learn fast, anyways, would you mind if I ask a question. Ok, be ready for this: how fast are you learning, and is it a good thing, or a bad thing that you are, or aren't? Alright, that's all for today, goodbye Carlos!
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Hey Carlos, it's Dion from Yaldhurst Model School.
ReplyDeleteGreat job. I would suggest you try new words that aren't too long but not too hard. You need to have capitals for the "I" in each sentence.
What one in the photo is you?
Anyway, your blog post is pretty good.
Bye!
Kia ora Carlos, I'm a year 7 student at Yaldhurst Model school, Today I wanted to have a look at your blog, next time can you go back and fix some spelling? Apart from that it's really good.Do you like speaking in english? Anyways
ReplyDeleteKind Regards Grace,
Kia Ora, I'm Amelia from Yaldhurst Model School.
ReplyDeleteI liked the way you explained what you were doing and added a photo of you and what looks like a friend.
When I read your post I learnt about what you are confident about speaking languages, like how you said you were confident about speaking English in Australia. Actually, in April I'm going to Australia for around 15 nights so, cool!
Next time, you could maybe fix some of your spelling and punctuation because it seems you don't have much punctuation in your writing.
I'm glad your learning to speak english, it's really good to learn how to speak new languages, I hope you learn fast, anyways, would you mind if I ask a question. Ok, be ready for this: how fast are you learning, and is it a good thing, or a bad thing that you are, or aren't? Alright, that's all for today, goodbye Carlos!
-Amelia
Hi,
ReplyDeleteI'm Rhys from Yaldhurst Model School.
I loved the way you explained what you were doing and put in a photo of you and what looks like a friend.
When I read your post I learnt about what you are confident about speaking languages, like how you said you were confident about speaking English in Australia.
Next time I think, you could maybe fix some of your spelling and punctuation because it seems you don't have much punctuation in your writing.
I'm glad your learning to speak english, it's really good to learn how to speak new languages, I hope you learn fast, anyways, would you mind if I ask a question. Ok, be ready for this: how fast are you learning, and is it a good thing, or a bad thing that you are, or aren't? Alright, that's all for today, goodbye Carlos!